by rmcgee
rmcgee,
Well, for the first out of the box, not to shabby.
You really need to stop, not writting more chapters.
Thanks for this ride, it's been fun.
WB
This could be a very hot sexy story. I hope you write more of it real soon.
She is 6 months along, due in 2 months, and she will be available to him for 3 months; must be that new math thing. Otherwise a good start on what could be a great series.
You have 2 great parts that would make excellent follow-up stories.