All Comments on 'The Private Game Ch. 01'

A little stilted, but a good start.

I'm sure this stuff a happens somewhere in the world but for me the wife's motivation for fooling around without the husband around wasn't well enough established.

Letting the friend feel her up soon after getting in the door just because her husband said he had a big dick? Why hadn't this happened before if she is that much of a horny slut?

2*

This is another cheating wife wannabe. And a spineless husband. Just get a divorce and save us from this repetitive, unimaginative garbage.

A real Texican Bull would have just informed her early on that the game was going to be postponed for a fuck-break. Since she worked herself up on how much of a Hung HornDog he would be, she might just opt for the first break to be a suck-break!

Sorry, but the dialogue and the scenario look VERY contrived.

2*

Can't even get the ages correct in the prelude to the story....let alone tell a story:

Mike is in his early forties and Lynn is ten years younger. She is five-five

Last I checked....ten years YOUNGER would be early THIRTIES....and it went downhill from there

Present tense works on the evening news, not in stories.

ten years younger and is five foot five inches tall dummy. if the author had said she was 105 would you have believed she was really old? or that was how much she weighed?

I personally cannot figure out which hate more, idiots who can't read, or cuck stories. it is a a toss up. A wife who plans ahead to cheat is not a wife. a friend who takes the wife of a friend is not a friend.

I thought it was a cute story. People shouldn’t be so picky.

I thought it was a great story. Where is the prequel that is referenced so often? for those who don't like cuck stories - why read them? quibbling about details (eg. age, weight, etc.) are not attending to the details that matter. this story gives the full description of the bodies, fantasy details,action, and lead in scenario that truly do the job of this kind of story. If you don't like it - give it a bad rating and move on to what floats your boat

Every cuck needs a friend who will serve his whore.

I love watching my wife flirt! I consider myself a cuck.

Being a cuck is bittersweet. The part some seem to miss is that she develops feelings for him which come out of your share. THe risk to the marriage is extreme. When she gives him something or takes his side against you you feel less secure in the marriage. Cucking is a dangerous activity at best.

10 Stars for a good story of a Hot Slut Whore Wife. LOL just cuz hubby told his wife that his buddy has a big dick, it looks like she is going for it before hubby even gets home from work. If she isn't careful they are going to be fucking when hubby gets home! LOL What a lesson that will teach hubby about his whore wife. But the story is interesting, I like sharing my significant other, aka wife. Many folks don't understand that but many folks do. If I was hubby I would not be 'OK' with this unless I had secret cameras installed all over the house. Women, NEVER EVER want to reveal what whores that they are, probably won't tell hubby anywhere near everything she has done with the friend. LOL fucking bitches. But Great Writing so Far, kept my interest up. I will read further. Thanks, Buster2U