by LiveCat
I loved this story, well build around an erotic couple. I would love to read a part two one day.
I have read this at least 3-4 times, and will return again. It is a lovely romance.
Your stories are just so good! The characters, the scenarios, and yes of course the highly erotic sex scenes!
Thank you so much!
Omg, this story was amazing! I loved it from start to finish and laughed along the way. I'm just gutted that it ended, a continuation, or more of the lives of Sian and Joss would be brilliant. Your a fab author.
Thanks again:)
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Way to tie up a story in a big, beautiful bow six pages long. A truly remarkable feat. Thank you.
This was written worth the skill of a professional author. I use to be a vet tech and love shows set in rural English village, so this was just my cup of tea. It is sweet and touching.
Apart from annoying formatting errors, this was another great story.
I don't know much about country life, but this presentation seems idyllic. Maybe too much?
But a warm happy story, nonetheless.
Every tale you telling here is a fabulous story and most of all conenting love passion heart soul laughter sadness pain and else, life ....... Thank you against n and another 10 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🌟🌟🌟🌟
Nice story but I had trouble reading the bottom of page three and the top of page four. These consisted of massive paragraphs with numerous conversations by many people as well as long descriptions of the sick horse, etc. Traditionally each person’s speech warrants a separate paragraph and such long paragraphs are nearly impossible to read. It almost looks like a formatting error. Please consider redoing this part of the story.
Nicely British, nicely soap-opera realistic and very well written. Definitely 5*
Meant to post a 5 star rating but missed the mark and can't seem to reset my rating. I'm sorry about that.
I really enjoyed reading this story it shows real love and petty hates some people have my reasoning is where you find love then take it with both hands and enjoy there love they have together. This is a brilliantly written story hope you will write more about Sian and Joss and will they marry, they deserve each other thank you LiveCat. xxx
This chapter exceeded all my expectations! The village drama was brilliantly narrated!
Mxxx
I enjoyed every part of that. Some parts even brought a tear to my eye. That was definitely captivating. Great job. Mark
Me and my girlfriend read it together and we both laughed and cried having had similar experiences in our relationship. I wish old jack had been around to help us at times.But we got over it and looking forward to our wedding.
Please keep writing more
Thank you
Aerial xxx
I have read many stories on Literotica, but, yours is so emotional, so real and so well written.
I just could not stop reading...
YES...
truly incredible
A great read Cat. Lovely people and setting.
I hope you are well and your inspiration continues. Look forward to reading more of your works.
Thanks. :)
It's great to have you back, what a sweet story!
Now if we could just get Dru_Druthers, SAbitch and FiveWolves posting again all would be right with the world!
I've been around this site for a while, never felt the need to post a coment to thank the authot. But this time, I'm deeply touched by this history.Very well written. Thank you!
This story is awesome. I don't comment ever but felt the need to. You did a really good story here :) hope to see part 2.
I loved this story and can't understand what the previous comment is on about. If you're gonna leave negative comments at least make constructive - or have the decency to not do it anonymously.
We all benefit from writers posting on this site - they'll stop writing if people leave crappy comments for no reason.
Thank you to Livecat and all the other great writers that keep us entertained
Contrived beginning. Stick thin characterization. Bones of a decent tale here though.
Yay, Cat, you're back and good as ever!!! The story is expertly woven with lovely characters. Loved, loved, loved the plot!! Your usual creative genius shines through as ever. I'm fortunate to be in the company of such brilliance!! Brava!!!!
A well written and lovely love story with some very yummy bits too! Thank you so much!
And as I understand it, welcome back ;)
so happy to see you writing again. i have missed your stories. so well written and the characters pull us right into their lives. a wonderful story and besides the girls, jack really came to life and stepped up unexpectedly.
i hope this means you are back in the story writing mode and look forward to more.
thank you for coming back and entertaining us!
jan
Taking a respite for nearly 3 years from writing, I enjoyed your story very much. Not sure if you plan on continuing the story, but if you do I really do want to read it.
The story was well written and kept me reading until the very end. It was nice to read such a tasteful yet erotic tale.
I love the fact that you left it open to continue on with the story.....which I hope you do. I would love to see where they end up
A wedding an anniversary we could easily have more. Thank you for a good read and a loving story.
Superb. A good lesbian love story is never too long for me. Once i started reading i didn't want it to end. The sex scenes were hot; got me tingling in a certain spot that's for sure. Five stars.
The characters, the plot, the sex. A great story.
Thank you for the huge effort.
there is nothing like a good love story, and this is a good one, but only thing was it is a bit to long for me so I read the first 3 pages and then skipped to page 6, but still in all a good story
LiveCat I am so happy to see another amazing story of yours. It's been a while but I hope this means your coming back to us.
I loved this story, the old man pulled off a great feat in showing the old biddies up with their own failings.
Hope to see more soon. Thank you!
It's small details that really bring characters to life. I love that Sian's vet emergency ring tone was "The Bad Touch".
Enjoyed it very much! Have enjoyed your other stories as well! Hope you decide to keep writing more and sharing!
It was beautifully written and it is obvious to me that you did your homework on country vets. The build up was beautiful and the background material was expertly placed and spread out. It is one of the best stories that I have read in a very long time.
It was such a pleasant surprise to pull up the site this morning and see a new story by you. I love the slow build up, allowing you the opportunity to enrich the characters and the story line. Just wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing Sian and Joss with us. I would also like to read more of these two ladies, if you wish.
Sincerely,
Greg
How wonderful to see a story with your byline again, and what great story it is! Beautiful writing and realistic characters are the hallmark of all your stories and this proves no exception. (I've prolly read "On the Rebound" 25 times) I hope we get more of Sian and Joss in the near future.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us
Doc
Lovely to see another of your stories. Nice characters and an understated English village setting.
Thanks again and best wishes for your writing.