All Comments on 'The Prize'

Cute story! Nicely done. But if she's there once she would be there for him again.. and again and again, if he's any good. Incidentally, look into the Bible and discover that adultery, sex with a married woman, is a capital crime. Rape with of a single girl is just a monetary one.

We seem to have it sdrawkcab (backwards) in our society.

I agree with you on the blonde wife. As you described perfectly "A girl can be beautiful, but she just hasn't lived enough to be interesting. It takes an extra decade or two to make a woman interesting."

Could stand to be a little smoother, but well written. Lots of stories around the edges just waiting to be told! Thanks a lot for writing.

well written and kept the interest of the reader. Very good for what I assume is your first outing on Lit. I agree with another commentor that there are several story threads present for sequals.

Very well written, and finally an interesting plot, but too wordy. I look forward in next submission.

z ma can be a damn fool. If i had a wife like her, I wouldn't ever take that kind of a chance