All Comments on 'The Problem with My Sister Ch. 02'

Good story. I hope you will continue. Thanks.

Another good premise.

Still rushed. Seems designed to be that way. Sad.

Three stars. Barely.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Now I have something to look forward.

I hope you will bring Ashley to the party.

Fantastic threesome in the many!

Another great chapter. I'm always trying to figure out backstories and upcoming events in stories, and I just cant shake the feeling Leanna has tasted Maria. Guess I'll see in the future. Five

Next chapter, please

Good story but needs to keep going!

For some reason I'm struggling to buy into the characters. I find myself skimming through part of the narrative looking for "more" but can't find it. The sex part is OK but it seems there isn't much dialogue about their relationship beyond previously unquenched sexual desire. 4*

You should have stopped the story with just the one chapter. This was crash and burn. What little emotion you had in the first chapter completely disappeared. Too mechanical. She was the Domme and the Marine was a Sub. Everything was planned too much.

Mas, please!

Keep going! Want to see what happens with Ashley.

If you decide to write again this needs another chapter

I love this story line!!! Keep it up!!!