All Comments on 'The Prodigal Son'

Good start I hope the next 2 chapters are as hot. Thanks for sharing.

I loved this, it doesn't yet need any 'Family' involvement as what you've written so far is Hot'n'Horny. I like it that you already have quite a number of incest related stories waiting to be enjoyed. I'm looking forward to the next chapter or two.

Great story

Incest/taboo category, yes?

So what was that because I can't regain the waste of time reading this when I was expecting your story to belong in this section. It doesn't BTW

You include a note this is chapter 1 and in the wrong category? Can't label the title correctly and wrong category? Looks like you're hunting for clicks.

What, you couldn't be bothered to use a chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story? Is it the readers you don't give a fuck about or your own story?

Re Anonymous

What part of the opening blurb did you not understand? Engage your brain before you comment!

"Before anyone makes a comment about there being no Incest in this story -- remember patience is a virtue, this is only Chapter 1" Means what it says.

This is a scene setter for the rest of the story. If it was posted in a different section you'd never pick up the following chapters!

You told everyone the next chapter was the payoff for incest. This was the build up. I still liked the set up and build up for the next chapter. Not too many writers write a good build up. They jump straight into the sex part. I know this is a sex website, but I'm glad you are writing a story that includes sex and not sex that includes a story. I will continue reading. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Good beginning and I can't wait to see what happens next. Should be interesting with how you have started it.

Great start With some interesting plot twists already. Looking forward to more!

What part of that information does NOT belong in the opening blurb but in the title don't YOU understand? "...this is only Chapter 1..." is the logical meaning of The Prodigal Son Ch. 01.

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Of course it doesn't belong in another section because a sane, rational, logical person would have automatically known that by the chapter number in the first chapter.

Too much conflicting information. First he has fair hair (blonde or light brown) then it's black. His sister a year younger than him, then they are twins?!? I want to like the story it's going good so far, but keep your facts straight if you plan to keep readers interested. Constantly changing facts make me loose interest.

Looking forward to hearing him fuck his sister’s Best Friend.

Of course some his sister and that surprise.

Was he “kicked” out for knocking up his twin sister?

Is the surprise a child of him and. His sibling?

How Exciting!!!

Hurry with the next chapter .

Can’t wait!

Too early fir a final grade. Thanks

Nice story. AAAA+++

Liking it si far and waiting on the incest part gave it a 4 !!!!!!!!!!