All Comments on 'The Professional'

My heading sums it up. This one was well written, believable, and managed to be a short bedtime snack of a read. Love the twist at the end, which made it oddly wholesome feeling too. Great job

I figured it out early on because I’ve read similar stories but I will say this is one of the best I’ve read.....great job!!

I enjoyed this one. Keep writing.

You know, I thought I had it figured out early on too but then the author threw in a few things that made me second guess myself. Like “Paula” saying Jesus Christ when it was already established that “Donna” was a Preacher’s kid & very religious. “Paula” talking dirty when “Donna” would’ve never done that. Excellent story StevenCin, you nailed this one & kept me guessing. Can’t wait to read more of your work.

Nice role play story.

One slipup; he refers to her as Donna right as he got to 'Paula's' room.

"The room was lit by the lamps on the nightstands. Donna was in the same stockings and shoes that she had on at the bar."

Very good story. It’s got good backstory without it being too long to get to the goods. I really liked that it ends up being a sweet story. I truly enjoyed that. I will look out for more of your work

For a well done

Variation on a Theme

Got me with that surprise ending! Ya gotta love a wife that finally comes out of her shell. Five stars! I really hope there's more to this story coming.