by Aurora Leigh
This story is like the heroine, Aurora: so very, very hot and naughty. I love college coeds who are just beginning to explore their submissiveness. They know they need to be spanked and punished and they want it so badly.
but the transitions from ballerina/anthro major to submissive were a bit abrupt. Other than that issue, I enjoyed the story. You've got an intriguing idea going on here, it just needs some polish and perhaps the assistance of an editor. And I like this lead character. You've got the technical stuff down, ie spelling, punctuation, etc. Up until I got to her out-of-the-blue mental musing about not having been spanked in a while, it was all good. Take care and now I'm on to chapter 2...and I do hope there's a chapter 3, et al.