All Comments on 'The Proposal Pt. 03'

Getting better and better love how this is going keep up the great work and to the haters saying cuck crap there are people who enjoy these storys so if u dont enjoy them dont read them and everyone likes different things so dont dismiss stuff just because its not your thing

VERY nice the way you're brining several plotlines towards some conclusion. It's starting to concern me that I'm going to invest all this time reading this series, only to see MC riding the Cuck-Go-Round! Turn back before it's too late! If you DO intend to end up there, that should've been stated in the intro to Part 01. It separates and directs your audience. Otherwise, a reader who hangs in all the way doesn't end up angry, and those who may've been interested had they know your theme, would've stayed; that's why about 1920 that synopses were invented in the publishing business.

Not typical story

What happens after chap 5? Going to finish it... Or leave it hanging...

Couldn’t finish it. Chuck writing poo.