All Comments on 'The Proposition'

by lil_smurfette

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please continue!

Fascinating premise--and one incredibly hot story! Can't wait for the next part

AgenaAgenaover 13 years ago
Fabulous

A fabulous story. Well done!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
EROTIC STORYTELLING OF THE HIGHEST ORDER

On the background/skeleton of an arranged marriage, internal feelings begin to work out on a sexy playing field.

Delivered with exceptional language and storytelling skills.

Paul in Oklahoma

IvyAguasIvyAguasover 3 years ago
No Instant Love

I like how their relationship is believable and their passion is a slow burn. You made it so well.

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