All Comments on 'The Proposition'

Lucky man indeed!

This story really screams for a part 2. 5*

A little predictable and really unrealistic.

A man with that much money turning a virgin into a prostitute for an education, is a real dog.

She got something of perpetual value. He acquire a rapidly diminishing commodity in exchange. Pleqasure comes and goes but a sound investment lasts forever.

Usually multipart series have the "Also In This Series" sidebar at the end, which this should have -- just as the author's "Little Mel" series does have.

Find the follow-up to The Proposition on the author's Submissions page.

Paul in Oklahoma

Excellent story! Jim is not treating Jenny like a hore, he's treating her like his wife...