All Comments on 'The Pros and Cons of Hitchhiking'

Good read but I had trouble visualizing the car scenes. You have Anton glancing to his right to look at Regina and also leaning to his right to kiss her. My passengers are usually on my right and would have to lean to their left to kiss me - unless I was back in Ireland and things would be reversed. Just a thought.

Regina and Anton really got it on in fine style. Good character build, short and to the point (pun intended). A little too much fancy vocabulary, but good hot suck-and-fuck makes up for a lot. Four plus! Keep on truckin', Stardog.

You built the characters well. It was believable, they were credible, as many characters in Lit stories just are NOT.

But. The story was spoiled by your addiction to unneccessary descriptives. We knew at the start that she was married: you didn't need to keep ramming it down our throats. Far too many adjectives and adverbs. Less is sometimes more. Learn that and you'll become a good writer.

This is intended to be a helpful and friendly comment. I gave it four.

Yet another quality tale from a quality writer ... I anxiously await part two as I imagine my own wife in Regina's "position" ...

I really think she should take this poor exchange student home for Christmas. I think they would both enjoy an American holiday, and she could show him around the country side on nice days, probably wearing a skirt, to make the afternoons better for both.