All Comments on 'The Puddle Ch. 02'

It certainly isn't what he is giving her now.

Perhaps she can teach him what it is that rocks her world.

Thanks for the read.

Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

No Way. A good, broad minded mother who deserves a son more considerate of her needs. But it's a fine well written story. A 5 for sure.

When I read your stories I can't help but think they always act like a husband and wife already a little bored of their sex life. The mother also often gets frustrated with the son as if he were her spouse. Also, the violence in this story was a bit of a turn-off personally.

You write a great story though and they are dirty (which is good). My head does get taken out of the story on occasion feeling the mother's frustration with her son and treating him more like a spouse.

Maybe this is a type of therapy for you? A way to take out frustrations that you have felt or are feeling?

Either way, I do enjoy your writing. I especially liked the mother displaying her dirty side. Sitting on the table, waiting for her son to get home. It paints a very hot picture and the teasing aspect is always good!

Well written and I look forward to more of your stories!

P.S. Sorry about the long comment.

I think you corrected the first part of the story, very well. She knew what she wanted, and he was quick to find it.

I have mixed emotions about the son's need (or fascination) with draining her cunt of thier juices. I guess it comes down to what floats your boat.

Still a good read !!!!! Thanks

Mark may be an excellent specimen of a young male, with a fine fat cock that's a real mommy-pleaser. But his mother is way ahead of him in her marvelously dirty mind. I love how she refers to her cunt as her "motherly opening" and her "motherly hole"--always stressing that it's the hole that her boy Mark came out of and that he's now pumping away at. She even talks about her kid ramming his cock up "his own birth canal," which is pure gold. Mom hungers for her boy's stiff young cock. Mark should make it clear that he's just as hungry for his mother's ever-loving cunt. If he weren't so dim, he'd match her, saying things like, "hey, mom, it's great being back up in here," and "your baby boy's going to blow his balls up where he was a baby," and "I'm about to give your mommy-hole a nice big sperm injection, mother mine," and "my mommy's got the warmest wettest twat in the whole fucking world!" I hope his mother's revenge won't be too brutal.

Good story; however, it is obvious that mother and son do not communicate.