All Comments on 'The Pull'

Title are your words, not mine. There are so many characters. The background information required to comprehend what is going on is endless. That it's complicated is a huge understatement. Simple fact, the 'pull' between William and Belial/Lial is erotic and loving despite all the other drama. Worth a read.

A good number of characters, but I can keep track of them all and enjoying reading it again.

I did think I had seen this before. However it is still very unedited. If you can't even spell 'angel' correctly instead of 'angle' then it's a lost cause. Too many spelling/ grammar errors. Could have been a little more in depth with characters. Some parts are erotic and very good. The not so good bits just out do them for me.

Once night stand, angle instead of angel, and so on. It is low on detail, something that makes the story seem a bit rushed. Characters are not developed. I suggest you take your time developing the story. It could be very good.