All Comments on 'The Punchline Ch. 03'

I really like your development of the characters.

Am looking forward to further chapters.

Enjoyable read

before they start a relationship?

This is a very interesting and entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.

Do you have a personal experience you are drawing off of for Grays character?cause this backstory for him is really hitting home with me as his rough relationship and it's end are sounding alot like mine.

I honestly think if I keep reading this story I will help deal with personal problems I'm having in my day to day life thanks to this story. Keep up the good work loving this story for sure!!!!

I find it ironic that reading a story off a sex story site is helping me deal with my own shirty experiences but I hope anyone in a situation like mine comes and reads this story it's freaking amazing just to hear out loud what no one will tell you to your face about how you are acting. Seriously this super helpful.

Can't wait for the rest of the tale. Gave this a 4* only becaus the story isn't over.

I was touched by your comment and I just want to reply...

Yes, this story is very much based off of personal experience. In fact, I have to say, Grayson's situation is almost exactly like mine at the moment.

I'm really glad people are enjoying this chapter, it seems this is the best one yet, and I have to say thank you all, I've been really trying to branch out a little bit into things like this.

And for all you pervs (love you guys) there is sex in the next chapter.

Thanks, I'm working hard on it.

I know this just a story

but some times stories are closer to the truth

I guess as you finish up this story (whenever )

I hope the bitch and asshole that did this to Grayson get there's

And hope to see more of these characters.

Please keep on writing

Please continue with the story ... it is really great and we are left hanging.

It's been over a month and nothing new. Where did this story go?

Really!

Is Chapter 4 coming soon?

I really can't wait, they seem so relatable :)

I have truly enjoyed this tale so far and am anxiously waiting for Chapter 4. Do you still have plans to continue?

Waiting for chapter four please

Hey, I love the story so far, but just wondering: will you finish it?

please make a chapter 4 the story is sooo good

When I first read this I thought it was good but had a poor ending, but now you have extended the stoy to include the mutual confession of love or at least a lot more than friendship.

A lovelly story, I will have to return in a month or so and see if the long awaited happy end is there.

Keep up the good work.

Love this story please finish it.

Please finish this amazing story. I really want to read how these two end up.

Well you promised...

Let's get the story moving! Really appreciate your efforts in this story. Now, BRING IT! 5*.

This author don't know how to complete his romance stories. A great story left undone and that a damn shame.

Really great story but wish you had finished it.

Loved the rosario+vampire reference, glad I'm not the only one who thinks Mizore is the best, mind you vamp Moka is pretty damn hot

This is really a great story.

waiting for chapter 4.

A shame it went unfinished.

This author was really really good. 10. Hope some one finishes it.

That was sweet. Hope we can see a chapter 4 at some point, even though it seems unlikely

Story as is does not have an ending. No chapter 4.

I hope to see more to this story soon!

Too long before ch 4. Too bad!

This was a well written and interesting story—funny at times too. It’s too bad that the writer ran out of gas before he could finish it. Still 5*

Still waiting on chapter 4, I'm afraid...