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Click hereSometimes you wonder if you and Esther are permanent. If something will divide you. If your anger will prove too much for her. If you're just both victims of young love that will part ways over time. Still, you maintain faith, and the longer you go, the more organic it feels.
When you get through it together, maybe you'll start believing in that happy ending.
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Anonymousover 1 year agoI'm 10 sections in and already sobbing seeing so much of myself and the queer people in my life. I don't know when or even if I'll be emotionally prepared to read this whole thing but it's already so visceral and honest and fucking IMPORTANT and I'm so so so grateful that you were brave and talented enough to make it.
Anonymousover 2 years agoThis story started me and one of my partners on the journey to each others' arms so I will always like it. It seems the queer/femme communities responded well. May share more to this acct -Maeve
Anonymousabout 4 years agoBut a welcome one.
I was looking for queer erotica, and to be honest there is not much on the erotica side here. Still, it's a very good read. I don't get the other comments: yes, you have a particular way of writing, but it's still good and I followed it without problems (even if I'm not a native speaker). I enjoyed the story, and it resonated a lot with me.
Thanks for sharing this, I hope there will be more to read from you!
UltimateHomeBodyover 5 years agoSounded so much like it would contain some heart with a message.
But your writing is too difficult to follow. It is like you are making notes about topics that you want to include in a story.
Slow down, remove 70% for future stories and write the remaining parts. Think about all the stories and books you have read, not school books, and how the narrative flows. Now write in your words so we can read your tale.
It is worth writing for us to read.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis may have been the best story i've read on here. I would love for it to continue. I also really liked the style it was written in.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI honestly had a hard time following all this and thought the first page was shout outs to the people who helped make this then the story would actually begin
