All Comments on 'The Ranch'

I don't understand why an author would spend a great deal of time writing a piece and then not take a few mins to add appropriate story tags.

When I woke up this morning, I had no freaking idea that I would be reading a story set in Ringgold County. Well done.

Really greeat story but you left so many clues to the identity of the real Jermiah, but the story has its good moments. It is good to see a writeer that puts the whole story in one submission instead of taking three weeks to finish. THANKS for a great read

Great story. Couldn't stop reading.

I greatly enjoyed the whole story. I'll need to read your other su missions now. Keep up the good work.

Very interesting and enjoyable. A few proofreading errors but not enough to matter much. Personally I could have done without all the (very) boring military speak and vehicle/ gun details. But I know they ring the chimes of those veterans who can't get past their past so they are difficult to avoid on Literotica.com

Excellent story, throughly enjoyed.

I can do without gratuitous military/weapon references or the sophomoric ranch lingo but you cross the line with a 15% RE commission. Too much chaff. IMHO.

Good story, well developed plot, good characters and nicely described settings.

Scene breaks and dialogue breaks would have been helpful. Way too much time devoted to weapons minute descriptions and military jargon. 15% realtors commissions only occur in their dreams.

Great story, wish there were more like this.