All Comments on 'The Ranger: (Real Ch. 01)'

My 2 cents

This is interesting . I will wait for the next chapter to see how you continue it. Thanks for your time and imagination.

More please

Very intriguing start

A nice easy read! Now on to chapter two.

Good start, is this following actual DnD? Or ?

Great start, can't wait to see how the story goes. Nice writing style, easy to read.

Good story so far.

Do find it a little confusing sometimes as to which character is speaking. Might just be me as others seem to comment about ease of reading. There seems to be quite a number of times where text that is descriptive is within speech marks as if being said by a character when it is in face not.

Hopefully this is helpful/constructive as it's still a good story and I'm looking forward to reading more :)

Many thanks for sharing with us.

Only ever read one other book that made a distinction between hunting arrows and war arrows. My suggestion is to add an explanation for readers who aren't that familiar with archery.