by ElvenAngel
Wow! I love your story. Can't wait until the next chapter. Please keep up the good work.
Excellent. Very erotic with good characters.Coupla things the editor missed.Early on there is a one I suspect should be a once.A bit later there is a her I think you meant to be a he.Loved the story.
Please hurry with part 3. And 4 and 5 and 6... I loved it. I am sitting here awaiting the continuation. Keep up the good work!