All Comments on 'The Ravencroft Women Pt. 03'

really nice story please continue it

Loved this one, happy it is a much longer piece and now we finally get to meet Noah. Hopefully we won't have to wit as long for the next part but I know you have a life to live beside just writing. The female characters are great certainly appears Nathan is to become the family sire, lucky man. I'm loving your stories, thank you.

Ah another chapter of Ravencroft, this was awsome.

An excellent series. Looking forward to the continuing adventures of the “family”. 😈

WOW! It was worth the wait.

I love the intrigue but the erotic segments not so much. Rough sex is a turn-off for me.

Next episode please

Still, really good, but Nathan is still too passive. For a self-reliant sort, he is not active enough in guiding his destiny with these women. He did stand up for himself a little bit this chapter, but...

Anyway, beautiful and really good at sex, but irritating and threatening, is not much of a draw.

I mean, nice girls are interesting, and enjoy intimacy, and ... sometimes are willing, or willing to be persuaded, to go on adventures in intimacy together. They rarely are irritating or threatening. Their crazy is usually of a different sort, not the sort that makes one wonder about STIs, how many other men are in their lives, or worry about how much power they might have over you.

That is not what this story is about. I look forward to your next installment, this still draws one in.

That. Was. Hot. As. Fuck. I understand quality takes time, but hopefully the next chapter doesnt take as long. There's truly a dearth of stories as good as this one. 5/5 stars only because I cant give more.

Dewey Cheatham

More please

@Morbidromantic

Sorry :P.

For what it's worth, there won't be much more 'rough stuff' going forward. Emelia was just disciplining Isabelle here. Noah is an assertive lover, but not to the point of being 'rough'.

However, I should warn everyone, Emelia is very sexually aggressive and dominant. Nathan is mostly going to be on the defensive when he finally meets mommy dearest. I don't necessarily plan for it to be femdom or anything, but she's definitely going to take him for a ride. 😈

More Please

Decent story, but he's so passive that he comes across as mentally slow. It's frustrating to read at times.

Please don’t take as long to write the next chapter. I really want to see where this goes.

Really good stuff here. Looking forward to more!

@LucilleCF, thanks for your clarifications, I really appreciate them. I understood that Emelie was disciplining her daughter but I didn't like she enjoyed doing it. I can't enjoy stories that are about the kind of stuff; BDSM is a huge turn-off for me. What I enjoy is taboo romantic stories with no swinging/swapping/sharing. I can understand that many readers find that kind of story boring, but it is what I enjoy.

5 Stars. I loved it - please continue and soon!

As weird as it sounds, this story is more fascinating then erotic.

You got this guy basicall being abused and manipulated by a bunch of sociopaths while having some of the hottest scenes ever written in between the horror scenes.

@LucilleCF

I anony'ed a day or so ago, down below. I am very glad you are involved with your audience, and, maybe, this story!

I was a little rough on the protagonist, but I am enjoying, this, and am glad you are still interested!

I LOVE THIS STORY! More, please! :D :D :D

Wow! what a surprise! Certainly not what I expected. I would love this story to continue. I read the first two chapters long ago, but had no problem re-reading them to get to the newest. You really should continue this to Emilia coming home.

MORE, and soon please

More please! And soon please! Thanks for this great story! 🙂 5 stars!

Easily worth 5 stars! Excellent character development and story arc. Loving it. More please

That was one heck of a roller coaster. The drama was already high and it got cranked to 11. The problem is it moved to an inhuman level. The writing is good so I continued but the female characters' lack self-control increased to an unappealing height, even for fiction.

Talented writing and intriguing story but the craziness is too much. 3.75/5

Thanks for sharing this tale.

Hopefully Noah will tone down the batshit crazy aspect depicted the Izzy character gives this story. Even in Batman Harley Quinn had some appeal but in the end she was just a psychopath.

The story has been pretty good so far, it was just sex sex sex for a while but in this chapter, there was a fair bit of emotion involved when Isabella went to his apartment and looked at the condition 0f it and the whole expired food thing, isabella showed genuine concern for him and also asked about his foster parents and life as a kid and even the conversation with the mom at the beginning where she was talking with her son for the first was decent, I am intrigued to know why precisely the Ravenscroft had to abandon their son, and how will the scene be played when they reveal that they're his family, one thing I hope that this doesn't lead to some orgy or something as from the beginning it has been mentioned that Isabella is way more "experienced" than Nathan and even the mom is similar in that aspect to her, and the surname "ravencroft" screams orgies with other wealthy families lol would love to see the story just be around the ravencroft women and Nathan, but hey that's just my preference, so far the story has been very good 5* for all the chapters, looking forward to the following parts, thankyou

This is an intriguing story so far, however I can't see Nathan acting the way he does being so docile boarder-line submissive with the hard life and way he has grown up. Especially with his determination on doing things by his own merit not on the backs of someone else. Also, very peculiar as to how his mom treats him considering see was the one who gave him up? Mom should be kissing his ass...I am interested to see where this goes.

Next chapter! Next chapter! Next chapter!

WOW!! No other expression comes to mind. Just wow! Fantastic story to this point! Character development is off the charts! What a roller coaster ride of emotion! I've stopped trying to figure out where your going in the story, and instead am just enjoying the hell out of it! Can't wait for the next chapter in this! Great work!

great story so far ..

hope there is a lot more to it ..

cant wait for the next chapter

Love it so far! Please don't make us wait 6 months for the next chapter!!

Please write more about Nathan, Izzy, Noah and Emeila.

I join with the others and ask very sincerely, "Please do NOT make us wait too long for the next chapters."

Having read all 3 past chapters, I am astounded at your literary growth and in such a short span! Wow! If this latest chapter is any indication of your future growth, I would like to buy stock in your future productions today. Please keep us informed of all your new adventures on any platform(s). Dare I say, other authors and would be authors read these 3 chapters and learn from them well. Last but not least, "Thank You for the Pleasure."

I'm hooked. Please continue. Please

Hey...can we expect another part of The Ravencroft Women

At least get him to meet the mother…

You're an EXCELLENT writer

Where's the next part ?

Hey Lucille, are you going to post another chapter to this story, or is this the end of the road? Please let us know one way or the other.

Sadly it looks like this storyline has been abandoned.

Really Liked the story would like to see the next installment to tie up all the Lose ends

Too bad this story has died, would love to read more of it