All Comments on 'The Reckoning'

by Mygypsy

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IzkaPlm18IzkaPlm18almost 13 years ago
More!

Will you be posting another chapter soon? :) :)

I hope soo! This sounds interesting! There isn't another story out there like this at the moment.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgealmost 13 years ago
You must have grown up with a lot of brothers.

You handle the dynamics of a dominant male group so well. Both here in "The Reckoning" and "To Love a Stray," you have a large number of male characters, but each has enough individual characteristics that, as a reader, I can pretty much keep track of them.

It occurred to me while reading this biker tale that there are similarities to the werewolf packs, with their alphas, betas, territories, and whatnot. What I can't say is why those of us who enjoy the dark fantasy stories love them so much. But it doesn't matter. A great story is a wonderful way to spend an hour no matter what. Thanks for giving us this one.

Fluffy07Fluffy07almost 13 years ago
love the story

hate Burg. I hope he dies a slow painful death!! Please continue though :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
nice change

Refreshing story line. Hope you write more. Love the dynamics of Josh and Tiger.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 13 years ago
geeze

great story can;t wait to read more of it

darkpriestessdarkpriestessalmost 13 years ago
hurry it up

i hope you have the ENTIRE rest of the storie(s) lol. im adding you to my faves. AWESOME read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WTF?!

All of these 'men' are first rate wankers; I cannot for the life of me think why ANY woman with half a brain, especially one with her own transportation to get the hell away, would stay and put up with such revolting treatment.

marlam5marlam5almost 13 years ago
Great story!!!

A great story as always.

Read most of your stories and you're one of my favourite writers.

Can't wait to read a next chapter.

PoesproppiePoesproppiealmost 13 years ago
Wow........

I have just found a great author who kept me reading from start to finish and my coffee went cold without me even noticing!!!

Please post the rest of this as soon as possible and please ignore the disparaging morons who hide their drivel behind annonymous WTF type posts. This is a well written story which is obviously way above their intellectual grasp!

Steve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
OH MY GOSH!

Can you PLEASE write more????? I LOVE this series so far!!!!!!!!!!! You're an awesome writer...definitely one of my favorites! Thanks! :)))

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Dear Lord there better be another chapter of this! This got me so hot and I can't wait to read more!

shyintxshyintxover 12 years ago
When When when

are you going to put out a new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

please you got 2 continue this story !!!!

ladybug71ladybug71over 12 years ago
MORE, PLEASE!!!!!!!

Wow, I thought Brad/Ren/Sky/Tanaya's stories were the bomb....but this story ROCKS!!!!!!!! Please write more....please, please, please!!!!!!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wish there was more

The characters were awesome:)

I really loved Tiger!

blondegrlblondegrlover 12 years ago
More please, been waiting forever :)

Please write more. I know you are busy writing the rest of "To love a stray" which I am also reading, but this story has just as much potential. I love the characters and the way you write. I try to finish stories where you leave off but my imagination is nothing compared to yours. Thank you for sharing it with us.

irish18irish18about 12 years ago
love this story

when are you going to write more. i just love this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
please!

please please please write more of this story! Have read every story you posted but the intensity in this beats all of the others and i think its even better then the whole Ren/janey/brad series(which i Love!). More please! :D

scotsrulescotsruleover 11 years ago
Awesome story

Looking forward to the rest of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Love it

Your writing is awesome! Love the dynamics! Please keep writing about Lily and the others!

bloodandsandbloodandsandalmost 11 years ago
this story deserves to continue on

please write more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow

Would love to read more of this story. great characters. Please continue and add another chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
please continue!

more of tiger and josh together could be wonderful

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
I guess okay

If that is what biker gangs act like they can have it. It's back to tribal existence and continual stupidity. Honestly, it is a fucking bore

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