All Comments on 'The Red Bikini Legacy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice

The humorous way Glenn discovered his parents secret had me laughing till I couldn't breathe. Mike's thumbs up was the cherry on top. Please keep writing about these folks!

dslwagondslwagonabout 4 years ago
Good story

Please keep your story going, can’t wait to see how much more your going to add.

Maybe even a little romance with Chrissy.

ROCKY70ROCKY70about 4 years ago
I LOVED IT. ^*!^*!^*!

I don't know at what point,THE RED BIKINI came in,

but the funny lines were great. I like a story with some

humor in it, it's not all sexy but funny as well.

Well done and keep them funny and cumming.

THANKS

USAF

syd_v63syd_v63about 4 years ago

One of the sitcom episodes needs to be ’I think I knocked up my mom’ and have a whole chapter about either that being a theme that is bandied about, with everyone struggling with the potential ramifications of it or it accidentally happening and getting written in to an episode.

HillfrogHillfrogabout 4 years ago
Great fun

It does not get much better or more rambunctious than this. Good yarn.

redking2882redking2882about 4 years ago
love it

my only complaint is its only two pages. you have become one of my favorite authors with these stories. i cant wait for more. truly love your work.

tobytimtobytimabout 4 years ago
Loved it

Great hot sexy story, needs more, far from finished, please more

Sex4lf57Sex4lf575 months ago

Love this storyline! You're still publishing so please consider continuing this story. Five stars and a favorite point!

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Middle aged guy with lots of experience. I'm terrible at role play. I prefer to just chat, either on topic or just friendly chatting. I write fantasy stories about family relations that are all posted here.