All Comments on 'The Red Moon's Power 01'

I liked the story plot.....please continue

Good start!

Your grammar isn't so bad, but thanks for the warning about the spelling. Proofreading, or using a literotica proofer would help.

You have lots of possibilities with this: outdoors, group, naturally hairy women, stong women/men; etc.

Very nice start to your story, and great characters, each with their own backgroup issues, which I think are both creative and interesting. The makes dramatic tension between the two characters is well established and believable, with a lot of promise for the future. I look forward to reading future installments!

So far it's great.

Geez, this is potentially a very good story, but please get a good proofreader. This is just painful to read. Aaaaargh!