All Comments on 'The Red Sports Car Ch. 03'

It's a pleasure to edit for you! Each chapter improves as the story evolves, and you've done a good job introducing and developing the main character. Looking forward to the last installment :) Cheers, Shawnene

I've enjoyed this story so far, and got aroused more than I should for this time of day lol, but the last 6 or 7 lines of that have nearly sent me running into the bedroom...

I'm gonna read chapter 4 first though LOL!

~MDA~

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