All Comments on 'The Redhead'

by T@nman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
REDHEADS... you've just got to LOVE THEM

Thanks T@nman,

for what I hope is the first of many adventures with Anne and her traveling fantasy buddy. (Now just where was that lodge again? I need to get lost there for, oh I don't know, about 9 days?) Fun story, and lots of room to grow; I'll (oops, we'll) be looking forward to more!

A redhead and her own special, individual fragrance - Certainly the main ingredients to a most edible sexcapade recipe! And just ONE can serve 1, to as many as 8!! <I'm still licking my lips heheh>

Great storytelling, and THANK YOU again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
IF I HAD MY LIFE TO LIVE OVER

T@NMAN

I'd want to spend a weekend with Anne.

You have wtitten an erotic story in a most tasteful way. Your way with words is exemplarary. I plan to read more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story, but overly long paragraphs

Dear T@nman;

This was an excellent blizzard story; I am grateful.

If you ever do a revision of this story, it would be appreciated if you could make the very long paragraphs into several shorter paragraphs. The long paragraphs become hard to read and you can lose your readers.

Thank you for considering this suggestion.

Anonymous
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