All Comments on 'The Reluctant Bride'

by ainu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good story------ but

I never was sure that you know the location of the HYMEN.

Marilyn

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good

I enjoyed your story very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting perspective

This was a really good story. The thing I liked most was its realism. It didn't seem that you put a glamour lens on to look at sex, but described it just as you experience it. That was refreshing and exciting.

There's plenty of fantasy here too -- at least from my perspective -- but the sex is very real and erotic.

Well done!

Anonymous
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