The Reluctant Journey Ch. 06

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His fingers moved down to her opening and this time his finger slid in easily. She bit her lip but looked into his eyes, her own face a mask of mixed emotions that were clouded over by lust. He looked down at her meaningfully and she nodded in response, giving him the permission she knew that he refused to ask for. He guided his erection to her opening and gently pushed. He slid only partially in and looked down into her eyes as he thrust quickly and completely inside her. There was a sharp pain that caused her to wince but he held still as she became accustomed to the sensation of having him inside her. They both breathed in heavy pants. Soon she encouraged him to move with small movements of her own hips. He didn't need any other provoking. He slid almost completely out and thrust back in groaning in the process. Her eyebrows were furrowed with concentration, the feelings she was experiencing were completely foreign to her. As he continued to thrust strongly and more quickly it started to feel good to her. She again wrapped her arms around him, trying to hold on as he thrust himself in and out. His back was slick with sweat and she could feel the muscles there beneath her fingers as they repeatedly contracted with his movements. She could feel an orgasm building as he began to move even faster. Just when she thought he was going to leave her behind his hand returned to her clit and applied just the right amount of pressure that had her arching her back and scoring his back with her nails as he finally came inside of her. Each had the other's name on their lips as they climaxed, yelling out simultaneously.

He relaxed his hold and his entire body weight was on her, pressing her into the mattress. She welcomed it. He was still inside of her as they both tried to catch their breath. She knew she should have a thousand things going through her mind but strangely enough her mind was silent and at peace, for now at least.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Huh, a very rapid but improbable 180 degree turn around to try and turn into consensual sex instead of the very obvious rape. Cain has literally zero redeeming features.

I did read ch 1 of your new story, as I mentioned there it’s brilliant but sadly not for me. This story is good, I’d say that the only thing that grates on me is the overuse of *little girl*.

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

What a bunch of infuriatingly unrealistic characters. It's so tiring listening to Cain blather on about how much he cares about and would do anything for his brother and yet nobody ever brings up the fact that she literally left her family to go to an unknown and possibly non-existent future in order to protect her sister. Why has she yet to fling that little morsel in his face? It'd be the first thing anyone else would say.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A round of applause

I loved this chapter. Especially the final scene, OBVIOUSLY. So good!

Redheaded_1Redheaded_1about 10 years ago
A rape scene..

A rape scene with a man who hasn't exhibited any redeeming qualities. There hasn't been time where she's really reflected too much on an attraction to him. It just felt forced, a true rape. I found myself curling my lip and shaking my head. I am someone who likes reluctance stories, but this just seemed violent and criminal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I Hated it

This chapter is awful, I was enjoying this story thoroughly. I think she shouldn't have given in to his rape. Cain is an a-hole punk and has been extremely cruel to her from day one since he kidnapped her. I understand she likes him because he looks cute but he doesn't have a good heart towards her and that sucks, he only lusts after her. He is a abusive violent pig and I guess that speaks volumes for her state of mind and self esteem. She deserves better

joodlejoodlealmost 11 years ago
Excellent

So many stories have the first fuck be paced and controlled. There is at least a small degree of foreplay. It gets old. This was pretty much rape. And damn was it hot. What of course made it so pleasurable was that you made it clear that they both wanted the same thing---to be with each other. I have not read one like this for as long as I can remember. Full on fucking. Angry hot fucking. Thank you, and I will definitely read all of the work you dish out, so long as it is within my genres. Encore mademoiselle. Encore.

jerzygirljerzygirlalmost 11 years ago
Holy $%^%$#

That was so unbelievably hot! My emotions were going from happy to sad, scared, elated, and as my hubby so elequently put it... "Horny as hell" :)

Terrific chapter and amazing story... 5 stars!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Love this story!

I discovered this story yesterday and read it all in one sitting. I keep checking back every 30 minutes in hopes that the new chapter has been uploaded. Cain and Malia are so sexy together. Kudos to you for writing such an amazing story!

Darlin92Darlin92almost 11 years agoAuthor
Pending

Chapter 7 was recently uploaded and is still pending.

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you like them, I hope that chapter 7 doesn't disappoint.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

This story is amazing! Is there another chapter coming because I can't seem to find more on your profile? I keep reading comments where you say youve uploaded it but I cant find it... x

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