All Comments on 'The Reluctant Mother Ch. 01'

Good story.

Don’t let this grow to complete debauchery.

You’ve already mentioned Keith from her past and

the neighbour catching them.

Many of this type of story descend into the son

Debasing their mother to become the town’s cumslut.

That would be a very bad move.

Fantastic story -one of the horniest ever !!!

There is something so deliciously dirty about mother/son incest, and you have written a very good account of what can happen when initial reluctance is replaced with enthusiastic acceptance. What I really enjoyed about this tale was the slow burn, which meant that Michael had to work hard to get what he was after. I unhesitatingly give this filthy fable five stars.

very good, many people wonder how to get to that point, i wonder who would like it to happen mums or sons ? what do you think

Great story need to follow on with next door neighbour now

Thanks S -- another brilliant story. I love how you depict the sexuality of older women, especially mothers, and especially when they enjoy anal sex.

You do the "slow burn" better than anyone.

Looking forward to chapter 2 -- J

You have amazing storytelling talent! Great story, thank you for it!

loved the slow build up. one of the best i've read on here

Marvelous! Many Adult sons live with Senior Mom. Often there is a strong relationship that develops that is taken to the highest level. It is a most wonderful thing

Very long, slow, loving seduction. I’m a senior so this resonated with me. What I enjoy most is a mother that thinks she shouldn’t but gradually accepts that her body wants to, and she gradually gives more each day. You are a good writer!

What an incredible story? Love the stockings!

Very hot story!!!!!!

I've read this chapter 1 several times and really enjoyed it. but then you publish Mothers persuasion chapter 2 after a gap of 5 months when we were expecting chapter 2 of this. That was very naughty but very nice too. Just keep surprising us all

I hope this can be a long series like Grandmother's Bed.

What a gifted writer you are !!!!! At the beginning you told readers about the first being slow and to skip over, and that was a disservice to your story, because you made these two characters become so real and three dimensional there, it became like watching a movie. I have so completely enjoyed this and a few others by you, I have decided to read all of your works here. BRAVO, and this could use many more chapters. JEF

It read like a slow seduction. In real life she is very old and will be bryond sex before he is tired of having sex with her. I think sex with some women over 50 is dicey. I think oral is a must and should be given first and often, even with no intercourse.

Bruce

still waiting for chapter 2 with baited breath

as I said a fortnight ago you surprised us by publishing chapter 2 of mothers persuasion. you really can't keep us all hanging on for what happens after they are discovered

A delicious use of words. An orthographic cornucopia of 'filthy' delights. The play of emotions, the reluctance and the rationalisation, gives it the burnished heat and look of red-hot steel, straight from the furnace. The son writes quite well, and the mother is a specimen of sensual womanhood, staid and intellectual. A simmering volcano, where the cauldron bursts forth, spewing sensual lava that covers mother and son, sheltering them in a warm cocoon.

They are destined to enjoy themselves, shielded from prying eyes. The unexpected appearance of the neighbour gives a spicy twist to the story. It is, as if, the sated embers of incestual joy are fed with tinder-dry wood, soaked in petrol. The loving son, ensconced in the warm rectum of his beloved mother, finds himself in a pleasurable and potentially dangerous situation, as his mother's anal sphincter holds him tight, in her dirty place of carnal delight. Oh dear, he and his mother are potentially in a pickle, as his pickle soaks in her rectal jar.

Thank you for the effort and sharing your work.

The dialog before sex and anal kind of destroys the excitement of the unknown. Just let it happen or not.

First story i read of yours. Will not be the last…I just love mature, I fuck quite a few of them in real life….but also an incest fan, specifically mom son. I will read the rest of yours for sure!

Wow! One of my favorites of all time! More please

Absolutely glorious.

If you write more, please don’t involve others.

The image of this sweet woman will be destroyed

I enjoyed this story very much! Well written and graphically interesting. No, how about a story where the folks next door become involved!

This is one of my favorite stories of all time

The tenderness, seduction and feelings of the son are so well written that you can feel them yourself.

This story brings so many memories to mind , but I was too much of a fearful teen to ever make an advance on my mom. The gradual breaking down of mothers inhibitions was believeable and that what makes it so exciting. Once i started reading it, I, being interupted, couldn't wait to get back to its excitement.

Hi to everyone... arguably the best and most perfect and structurally sound writer I've come across in Literotica... I appreciate the difference.

Wonderful slow build story, love the mother in particular.

I love the mature characters and the slow build. Good work.

Very, very good story!!!!!