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by wanderer2704

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SiennaSiennaalmost 19 years ago
Nice one!!

Hi,

I read it and I like the style it was written in. But, and excuse my criticism here... I think the "idea" of the the story needed a little more developing and possibly more editing in parts.

The flow was good and it was easy to follow. Very "creative".

Sienna x

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