All Comments on 'The Rendezvous Pt. 01'

There's a couple minor grammatical errors--and I've been so close to this online affair myself that it thrilled me!

Chapter 2 begins....?

You have detailed the emotions, reasoning and the slippery slope so many people have experienced in their quest for 'just that little bit more'. Very well done and looking forward to Ch 2.

As someone else noted, there are a couple minor proofreading errors - proofreading is a hateful occupation - but this is a wonderful start to a series.

Yeah, sorry for typo's and errors. I had edited and proofed the story, and made a few changes. I had saved it as a different file name. I think I must have uploaded the original, unedited version.

I am revising Part 2 now.

I'm a pretty good reader and only saw one excusable typo,,no big deal

Story line is good, as one of the other commenters stated, I too have been soooo close to this scenario more than once,,,,keep up the good work, look forward to chap 2

Can't wait for more!

Loved reading your story. Hot, realistic and almost a little to familiar. Can't wait for the next chapter.