All Comments on 'The Rescuer Ch. 01'

Excellent, can’t wait for the rest...

Vivid and intriguing. Looking forward to future chapters

Thank you so much for the kind comments! They really help keep me motivated!

The next section is already under its final self editing. I recently added a name for Keeley's Ex, The choice of Seth for the louse was directly made by a previous pre-reader, so I do listen to feedback, at least where the already written story allows it.

Chapter 02 is almost twice the size of the opening. It begins to delve deep into the backgrounds of the main characters and will introduce you to more than half of the remaining actors.

I am so excited to finally getting these new scenes out to a wider audience! Please keep voting and sending me comments, both public and private. If you have questions about the story, feel free to send me a private message!

Thanks as always!

TheRescuer

Thank you for this beginning of what I know will be an epic adventure. Brilliant.

Amazing story, can hardly wait for the next chapter!

I had the unexpected opportunity to do several marathon editing sessions over the weekend. Chapter 02 has already been submitted and is waiting for approval!

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I want to thank everyone that has voted and commented on this opening salvo! Please continue to comment, either publicly or privately. For me, hearing feedback is a pivotal part to speeding up the release of new chapters. I am not overly concerned about scores, but I do like the coveted "Red H"! Being a reader myself, I am more likely to give a new author or story a try if I see one of those. My only concern with voting is wanting as wide of a range of people as possible read this new novel!

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Given the unusual nature and format of my story, I will certainly NOT ever be a threat to anyone looking to be on the 'Top" of any lists! :)

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Thanks as always!

TheRescuer

Chapter 02 just went live! I hope you enjoy it!

Chapter 03 just went live! Please take a moment to vote kindly on all the parts you have read! Comments, both public and private, really do help speed up the editing process! Thanks for all of your help!

Loquacious, lugubrious, convoluted. Not words I would normally use to describe a story. I am caught up in the story line so I will probably continue reading. This is a bit like an overly complicated souffle.

Puhh...I feel like this could have been cut down in half without losing much of substance. Its probably just not for me.