by BigMadStork
Another great chapter. Keep'm coming! Thanks for your time and imagination.
Amazing chapters 1 after the other. I hope you continue as this is a thrilling series.
Another amazing chapter and with a good combination of action and sex.
Always an amazing read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Looking forward to future chapters and stories.
Love the way you are putting everything in perspective the details and the plot, the story is great and you have thought out every detail. Please keep it coming.
This is one of the best stories on Lit at the moment. Can't.wait for the next chapter
Sentences and whole paragraphs are missing.
All the descriptions of Brian and the Seals' actions are very primitive. It's on the level of a C-movie.
Let's discount the fact that this is not an action story, but a porn story.
Okay, I really like the story...it is kinda out there, is not terribly accurate as far as the military, etc, but is still entertaining.
"Nikita", or "Nakita"...which one is it??!! I know the stories are all written, but you really needed lots of editing help...a "REVISITING" of the stories, possible re-writes/correction, would be nice...
Still, **5**Stars...because it is so much fun!d
(And, not to worry about Kim, Mary, Dana...they will accept this out of-hand...he IS Brian after all...😀😀😈)