All Comments on 'The Rescuer Pt. 04'

by BigMadStork

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
My 2 cents

Another great chapter. Keep'm coming! Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Amazing

Amazing chapters 1 after the other. I hope you continue as this is a thrilling series.

NewnotsureNewnotsureabout 5 years ago
Yep

Yes please keep them coming

NewnotsureNewnotsureabout 5 years ago
Yep

Keep them coming

Geisha1Geisha1about 5 years ago
Great chapter

Looking forward to the next. Well written.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Perfect

Another amazing chapter and with a good combination of action and sex.

sabra16023sabra16023about 5 years ago
Outstanding

Enjoying all the great read. Please continue ASAP. Thanks

starbanestarbaneabout 5 years ago

Always an amazing read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Looking forward to future chapters and stories.

dslwagondslwagonabout 5 years ago
Fantastic Story

Love the way you are putting everything in perspective the details and the plot, the story is great and you have thought out every detail. Please keep it coming.

KJ1958KJ1958about 5 years ago
Absolutely Brilliant

This is one of the best stories on Lit at the moment. Can't.wait for the next chapter

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Darn good story. AAAAA+++++

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

Sentences and whole paragraphs are missing.

All the descriptions of Brian and the Seals' actions are very primitive. It's on the level of a C-movie.

Let's discount the fact that this is not an action story, but a porn story.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years ago

Okay, I really like the story...it is kinda out there, is not terribly accurate as far as the military, etc, but is still entertaining.

"Nikita", or "Nakita"...which one is it??!! I know the stories are all written, but you really needed lots of editing help...a "REVISITING" of the stories, possible re-writes/correction, would be nice...

Still, **5**Stars...because it is so much fun!d

(And, not to worry about Kim, Mary, Dana...they will accept this out of-hand...he IS Brian after all...😀😀😈)

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.

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