All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 02'

I think leaving us hanging like that is considered cruel and unusually punishment. While I will be waiting on tenterhooks for the next chapter, take your time and forget about the impatient folks out there. Your good at what you do, so please keep doing it.

Cliffie!<br><br>

Wow, this was beautifully written. I loved hearing about their budding romance through Nick's eyes, how much he yearned for her. It was all going along beautifully - so what happened and why did he think she was lying to him? I can't want til the next update.