All Comments on 'The Retreat - The Conclusion'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Continuity

It took me a few moments to figure out who Laurie is. In previous chapters the mother’s name is Leslie.

Very formulaic. It took eight chapters for the main characters to have a conversation they should have had ten years ago. Unbelievable.

danoctoberdanoctoberover 5 years ago
Very sweet story.

Extremely cute. *****

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I can't believe she'd marry someone who flipped out so violently. God knows what he'll do next time he's wrong about something, getting married won't fix his issues.

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