All Comments on 'The Return Ch. 02'

None of the huge gaping Plot holes of the 1st one.

you are back with a BANG. Your stories are quite interesting & important thing about your stories is that everyday new chapter arrives. This chapter was good & the story is getting much better.

The audience is smaller in Novels and Novellas but you do not have many negative criticisms either. I admit that I only started reading this one because I liked your first story.

This one is coming along quite nicely. It seems to me to be fast paced for a novel.

like the protagonist's character. he is not perfect, but he is also not a martyr. like the story so far. waiting for the next chapter.

Picking up steam. This is good story, getting better.

Very Nice work Author.<P>

More should be reading your tale.<P>

With High Regard

the previous comment before was the one that made me actually go to the first chapter of this story and read it from the beginning. (saw it in the feedback portal section- thanks ;) This is such a great story. Will definitely be looking forward to the next part. Totally amazing so far.

You really are becoming a fine storyteller; your tales flow and your characters and plot hold my interest and leave me anxiously waiting for more.

Interesting plot, great characterizations, flows smooth. Well done. 5 stars.