All Comments on 'The Return of Momzilla'

by RogueUlfric

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done, but feels very much unfinished

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

Great sequel. Are you a snake person, or was just good research?

Either way you wrote a cracker tale.

5/5

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

I was duoyou did a follow up, but is was a great epilogue for the original. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Once again, a 10-star story!

Aqua317Aqua317over 1 year ago

I wish he had let the snake bite Mom. Problem solved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great follow-up to Third Time's a Charm!

Thanks for sharing.

G

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nicely told story except the ending seemed a bit abrupt. Kinda like the good fairy waved her wand and they all lived happily ever after ... end of story.

inka2222inka22224 months ago

WTF? the evil bitch isn't even in real psych ward, never mind a prison where it belongs? And of course the wussy idiot decided it was a good idea to let the fuckface near life threatening snakes. I mean from first chapter we know he has shit for brains, despite all his education.

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Retired USN. Played ice hockey (goaltender)) 10 years. Teaches snake identification and snake bite treatment to first responders, military personnel and clinical medical personnel. Currently married to second wife (first wife passed away in 2011. Long time writer of poetry...