All Comments on 'The Return Of The Bully Ch. 03'

Have to be honest, it read very similarly to how I imagine a romance novel reading.

Romance novel yes but a good ending none the less. Congrats! It was a very enjoyable read.

A great revenge story for shore.

Chapters 1 and 2 the story went

this way and that way, and was hot.

But this last part brought it all tighter

in a good, good way.

A super series Wonderer4.

I felt sorry for Tina and Sarah at the end though.

don't like revenge angle in this genre

Your plot was great, but become too far fetched.Rich friend, turn around revenge...

You should have presented John in the first story, adding some bits here and there about him.The turn around from weak geek to strong new bull was too fast.

One were mike wins

It was all and all a well written story a story of revenge on the long time bully and the other kids mom it is a story that says it is not ok to bully someone weaker than you and that it is not ok for a mother to betray her son it was an epic story of revenge you should write more stories like this one

That was really good. I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. It was well paced, the characters were well developed and the outcome was satisfying.

If I had to make one tiny complaint, its that John probably should have been mentioned or introduced because if he was, I must have missed it. I feel a character that important should probably be set-up before the final act of the story.

Aside from that, this story was a great read, thanks for the contribution man.