All Comments on 'The Reunion Trap Ch. 01'

Could use a little more editing, but interesting enough to continue reading.

A great start!

Premise needs a bit of work. A judge cannot preside over a trial where a child or other friend or relative is involved.

I've edited the story for mistakes and made the premise more plausible.

So far, good tale. Hope he gets it together. LP

Apparently this author only writes dumb shit.