All Comments on 'The Revenge Fuck'

I loved it! When she talked with her husband while fucking her son was especially hot! I hope that there will be a followup chapter to see what happens the next day. Five stars and a favorite point!

just the thing on a grim December day.....

Very hot,Very good writing, *5* stars from me! Looking forward for more.

Please continue!

Little too big of a leap for me... but the premise was good.

Need more 😘

It’s a yes !!!!

Mostly brainless.

Let's start with $200.00 a plate being extravagant. I take it you have never been invited to this kind of event. And it goes downhill from there right through to the end.

Hope you do another chapter and keep the relationship between them going. Great job

I hope you write part 2 to this story & keep up the good work.

This was a great story. I have a new favorite author. Please continue this story.

What a great story, can't wait to read more from you!

Well written and very enjoyable.

Here's hoping for regular updates!

Delightful!

Really enjoyed this story but of course it was too short. The build up was very good and the story line very

plausible. Obviousy like many other readers I anxiously await the continuation. I see a long and interesting futurefor these two. Well done and well written.

On sweet revenge, loved it.

What a family of selfish, stuckup people. Wouldn't give them a fart if they ran out of air to breathe.

I approve the absurd, raunchy, comedic plot. My Shakespearean legacy lives on.

I can enjoy a short, absurd story written by a skilled author, but this is different. This rubbish is someone’s actual, best effort. The clever, well thought-out title shows the massive amount of thought and effort which went into this creation.

tHe rEVenGe fUCk ... duh. Enough said.

But talk about overreacting to getting pushed in a pool! Lol. I say keep going. I wanna read more about this crazy lady

A bit unbelievable however, i still liked it. Like another commenter said I cant wait to read more about the crazy adventures from this vixen.

Loved every bit of it. I was a mother admirer when i would see her nude with a full brown bush. loved to see her in a girdle,open crotch and stocking connected to girdle suspenders and she was very pretty!!!

I very much enjoyed it.

Holy smoke! Thank goodness for Mr. Waters the biggest D-bag in the world. He should have jumped in the pool himself but I understand that since most of the major donors were men and wanted to fuck or see Mrs. Waters in the nude that she had to be the one to fall in the pool. Perhaps for the next chapter Mr. Waters could have an accident where his penis accidentally gets separated from his body. Since he cannot perform his husbandly duties his son will have to make to sacrifice and do it for dad. You know what they say "A happy wife is a happy life". Looking forward to read more.

Awesomeness. Great read. Love your imagination.

I’d love to see a second part of this taking place in the morning

The gathering must be at the gatekeeper's place. 5000 (sq.?) feet? $200 a plate? Really? Nice idea but up the ante and enter the world of the rich and powerful. 10,000 to 15,000 sq. ft. minimum. Entrance by invitation only and either the evening provided for freely by the gracious host or $1,000 a plate to be donated to the host's indicated charity.

Loved the naughtiness of this wanton cougar getting her revenge!

Read your story out loud to yourself before publishing it and you'll probably find many ways to improve your writing.

(5/23/2023) This is my second read and I don’t know why I didn’t comment the first time. This was a great very compact story. There was no filler at all. I’d like to imagine this encounter not being a one-off for them. If hubby isn’t holding up his end, then she has every right to seek what she needs elsewhere. Even better when she gets it from someone she loves, who loves her back and appreciates her. Hubby snoozes he loses.

Next chapter

I trust this is not a one off story.

Joey needs to become his mother's keeper.

To the anon that posted 2 months ago what world are you living in needing to become his mother's keeper this isn't some midevil times shit this is 2024