All Comments on 'The Rhythm of the Heart'

This is absolutely without a doubt the best short story dedicated to the heart and soul of a woman's orgasm.

An abysmal story built on fractured prose as infatuated with its own volubility as it is exasperating.

A+++++++++++ "Anonymous in San Diego" is smoking crack, this story was BEAUTIFUL and very sexxxy!!!

thanks... fine, fine thing...occasionally beautiful, intimate and exquisite... fairly well constructed and overwhelmingly erotic... more please

okay, so I'm new to this and I LOVE this, not loved, I still enjoy it very much so. I realize you haven't submitted anything as of late, but please please please more!!

maybe a sequel?? it feels openended and god this is amazing and begs for more!!!!

great write