All Comments on 'The Riddle of Maya'

Crazy story, but with a happy ending (which is great to read). Sequel? A story about Jodi, too (she seemed like a real nice person)? Etc?

This was a fun story! I really liked all the character moments and realistic dialogue. Not really sure where the femdom came in though?

This is the first story of yours I’ve read, and it was a knock out! Great reading about real people with real emotions and feelings. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to another visit in the future.

You know, a story about Jodi isn’t a bad idea.

Since I had already read your sci-fi and horror entries. Holy crap, you have talent. Excellent reads, keep up the good work.

What the fuck this is such a good little slice of life

I love all these characters, I ended up just reading through the story with a smile on my face to hang out with them a little longer

Awesome story, really well-written. I was expecting a threesome with Sarah, since she and Maya both hinted at being interested - maybe in the sequel? ;-)

I also agree with a previous Anon that the femdom tag is a bit of a stretch. That's actually what I searched for when I found this story, and there isn't anything in the plot that I'd even consider light femdom, but I still gave 5 stars of course.

If it’s a threesome you’re looking for, it’ll happen. Just not with Sarah.

"I worry that on some level you think I'll be the same abusive bitch that I was before. You'd have every right to worry about that;" That was honestly my biggest worry. At that point, I was 95% sure she would blow up on him the first time he left the toilet seat up or something. Than when she said he was a lucky, lucky, boy, the only thing I could think of was, no, you are the lucky, lucky girl since he is giving you a chance to prove you can be a decent human being...but she was being so self aware before that with her apologizing and not letting him brush her behavior under the proverbial rug.

Than she actually cried when they had sex. And she actually seemed to be genuine. I am rather amazed by her, honestly, in a good way. She really did work on herself and was genuinely nice to him after they cleared the air. Kind of disappointed the threesome with Sarah never happened, I was so expecting that to happen. Also, Mike literally deserves the best bro award... Dayum he was so friggen supportive and chill.

Mike rocks, I definitely need to bring that dude back sometime.