All Comments on 'The Ride'

As usual, truly excellent. I look forward to each and every one of your submissions.

Thank You!

You gave fair warning at the beginning of the story about bikes and technical stuff; about which I know nothing. However, the mark of a good writer and enthusiast shows when they can make it exciting and enjoyable to the completely uninformed. I was carried away by your enthusiasm and the wonderful characters you developed. Thank you indeed.

Absolutely amazing story. Thank you

A very nice story. Still needed some proofreading. In the big scheme of things the attraction between the two of them just didn’t quite have the ring of authenticity. It came out of nowhere with no real reason for it. Great motorcycle story, however. Solid 4*

Absolutely brilliant.

Vicariously enjoyed your love of 2 wheels — rode a motorcycle back in the day and every time i took it out on the road or across fields my heart raced — so many stories :) This piece featured great dialogue, identifiable, real characters and a romantic storyline hidden not so deeply. Always smile when I see a post from you. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very good. The kiwi slang was fun and challenging, on top of the biker slang, but good story.

Loved it! Good work.

I'm not into bikes (don't even like 'em much---but that's me, just a boring old fart) but I did like the story. It was well-written and a real page turner (if you can apply that term to a computer screen). Just a few odd typos here and there but nothing to detract from the tale. Well worth every one of the five stars I've thrown your way.

Fire story, Cagivagurl. Learned many things in a very interesting way. Five stars. Randi

That's one hell of a tale! 5*, of course.

You are an amazing writer! I hope at some point you continue their story I would love to see where life takes them. Thank you for sharing you ability to tell a story with us.

This author is very diverse in her erotica. She is among my favorite writers. This story is a perfect example of her diversity. I loved it.

Nice story.

Cracking story, thanks. But hub centre steering, meh.

Cracking story, thanks. But hub centre steering, meh.

A very kiwi story ;-)

I always enjoy your writing, and this was no exception. What I really liked this time was getting google maps up and going on the rides with you. Living all my life in SW Oregon USA, I just got to visit a little of rural NZ. Thanks so much for a great trip, and a great story. 5 stars! *****

Loved it. Like Migbird, I used to ride and I found this story very good and authentic. Great job 👍

Fuck yeah. Great story. Enough said.

Hooked

Great story, even though I felt you stretched the power of a Boxer. 5+

awesome

And here I thought Kiwis were all sweetness and light.

If you’re gonna write fiction you might as well own a Vyrus! Loved the story, loved the mech … thanks for sharing.❤️

Your work is amazing. Love the writing and story.

I LOVED this story. It was a very enjoyable plot with characters you would want as mates. You brought back memories of my time on bikes in WA with lots of sand, dirt and flies and yes it was hot. Based on my experience kiwi girls were much more down to earth than social climbing WA girls. Thank you.

Another really warm and wonderful story from your hand.

I really liked it

Fun read, although I did have to resort to Google for help on some of the mech. 5*

Woe apart from a great story, well expressed, I've learnt so much about big bikes, and racing. Step aside Valentino Rossi.. Thank you

My eyes lit up on seeing your latest story and as always, you did not disappoint. Two really interesting main characters and a great story filled out with a bunch of hard-ass West Coasters. This Christchurch lad loved spending weekends on the Coast as a teenager and your story brought back lots of great memories. A 5* all the way.

Loved it.

Now I wonder how much of that is lived experience?

Thank you.

Almost didn’t read this storey, it’s a genre I normally avoid, however I decided to start and see how it went, read all the way, wow loved it great, great storey, love the Kiwi language. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I thought it was a decent story. A little longer than was perhaps necessary, but that seems to be a part of your writing style, so it’s fine. Somebody once said “Write about what you know.” I used to be a soldier, so the POV character in the one story I have posted here was a soldier once, when he was younger. You know and love bikes. I think it made for a good story overall, so let’s not be apologizing for writing about something you love. Nice work.

Like the locale - actually been there. Bikes are not my thing but the story made it so, in a real visceral way. Bit brutal at the end; marital settlements NZ style are sad but that was on the far side of bizarre. Left a bit unexplained; where do they go from there? However you cant expect the Princess Bride on the West Coast.

Enjoyed the story. The mechanical aspects did not detract at all. The characters seemed real. I always enjoy reading stories from this genre by this author. Thank you!

Good rough story. And paraphrasing your opening, some very good masturbation, well presented. Your masturbation, not ours, of course. Bikes are hot … but not THAT hot 😄

Don't know how "realistic" that was, but it either showed one hell of a lot of very consistent imagination … or a fictional view into a real world that few of us would ever even think of getting close to. Well done.

I had already you pretty much pegged as a north of Auckland girl, but all this south of Wellington shit has me so confused I got no idea *which* end you're from ☹️

Bikes and girls and idiots are a close proximity ….. and engineering is for sure a quality to built stuff, doesn’t matter what kind, bikes for example ….. and for your bike love thats kind of easy, fast extraordinary crazy and a freedom of its own ….. and yeah you will find girls pushing the limits and they are much faster and tougher then guys …… so a great story

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Brilliant idea and well written but her success on the bike is a bit Disneyland.

Enjoyed, well written, fun story - thank you.

Cagivagurl you are much more than a good writer, you are truly exceptional! Thank you

EXTRAORDINARY. For me, only one time on the South Islan and not the Tasman coast - I had to get a roadmap - you surprise me over and over and over again. Boat, fishing, bikes, motorcycles, the 21st century woman challenging us overconfident men. My Dad started a boatyard, from the sand up, and junk from the 1964 World's Fair in New York - your chutzpah rivals anything I have ever seen. Of course, my Dad's Mom married 4 times and got an honorary degree as an Australian local historian, (the people were cooler than her books), eventually living in Armidale. We grandkids loved Kiwis - and boats (not many in Armidale). You are the best whoever, whatever, and whenever you are. DON'T STOP