All Comments on 'The Ride Home'

short but very sweet, would love to hear more

Nobody could play 18 rounds of golf in much less than a week! I assume the author meant holes of golf.

Authors should understand what they are writing about or not write about it.

It is wearisome just to spot the mistakes.

So she dropped one semantic mistake - we're not all avid golfers.

The writing was great, as we've come to expect from O.G., and the action was passionate, hot, and detailed enough to paint a proper image, while obtuse enough to let our own minds fill in the blanks - also an OrdinaryGirl trademark, if ever there was one.

I think it's great, all snafus over "rounds" and "holes" aside. Live and learn.

I like a hot, sloppy blowjob from a sexy, horny girl a lot more than I like golf. Maybe that's just my American mindset. Anyway, great story... keep them cumming.

As you know, Ordinary Girl, I very much like your writing. I'm wondering if you might want to start experimenting with different lengths. Your stories are all very brief. Sometimes that's wonderful, like with this one.

Other times, however, the brevity can either lead to the sex starting faster than is believable (or too many details left out) or it can lead to several brief chapters. Chapters are fine, but if they are all the same length, readers can feel overly teased.

I hope this will be received as constructive from someone who finds your material VERY hot.

A brief ride made that much shorter by a very pleasurable encounter with a charming companion, much like my visits to an Asian massage parlor. Of course, there are times when the experience can be made even more charming by even more companions. Wouldn't it be a wonderful experience to play an entire 18 holes with six different companions, no matter how long it took?

A brief ride made that much shorter by a very pleasurable encounter with a charming companion, much like my visits to an Asian massage parlor. Of course, there are times when the experience can be made even more charming by even more companions. Wouldn't it be a wonderful experience to play an entire 18 holes with six different companions, no matter how long it took?

Give us more!

You are VERY talented! Would love to see longer stories....