All Comments on 'The Ride Home from the Game'

Fun story. I liked Em's turnaround. As far as the technical details - you did a good job with your own proofreading - showing that it really can be done. The only two things I remember were apostrophes; 'it's' for 'it is' and the other was the plural possessive form of their parents' house.

I stopped reading at “white” college kids.

I am from Ontario Canada, and have driven that highway from MtAiry (Mayberry) to Fancy Gap many a time. Beautiful view, and deadly road in nasty weather. Drove it many times in both transport truck and personal vehicle. Love Mt Airy. Lone Star Restaurant is the best. Now for the story, how come I never get brother sister times like this.... wow. Short but sweet, but very good story.

Sexy. Sibling sex, being so taboo, is such hot sex. Having your brother’s penis inside you, filling you with his cum…..hmmmm!

5 Stars. More please.

I'm a little confused why two schools from North Carolina were playing in Canada, but aside from that pointless detail, it's a good story

White college kids. Pointless detail.

5 Stars, Great story, a few misspells, but overall, a good effort.

Very good, But please continue with Love Muffins.

Ignore the comments re "w...e college kids", other Anons are sometimes too Anal.

Oh, just noted both start with an "A"! Couldn't resist posting comment as Anonymous.

Rgds AWAKADS

5 stars for a 'quickie'.....

Porn videos HAVE to aay 'step' brother or 'step' sister, mom etc.

Interesting that a story can be full incest though...

The 'taboo' element takes it a step further into sublime doesn't it?

I don't desire a family member personally but I sure enjoy reading about it....