All Comments on 'The Right Subject'

When a writer (kennyWright) appears to achieve empathy between his characters - without using a spotlight or camera, it becomes enjoyably noteworthy. This short story offers the progress of a blind-unknown feeling of trust that blossoms into a beautiful communication of trust; which lingers in the vicinity of intimacy - shamelessly displayed for today and tomorrow. ---- THANK YOU

It was too short. Actually, it was excellent the length it was, but a wee bit more about each of them, just enough to give the reader a little more direction and some interesting gaps to fill in on their own would have made a really, good story, great.

Thanks

Wow, that's a fantasy to wish for ... an innocent meeting, flirtation and chemistry and a very sexy ending. After reading it, I took a steamy bath, closed my eyes and imagined I was Christina ...

I thought it was awesome. I liked your sense of humor and the intimacy involved. Only thing, next time, use an editor, please. I totally understand how you got lost in your own moment and you were able to make the story sexy, intense, and sweet. Unfortunately, some misspellings caused the story to seem choppy somewhat as the reader has to correct it in their mind. Still an amazing story and I'm giving it 5 stars. KEEP WRITING!!

Just a little more, and it would have made my 'save it' list, and turned a 4 into a 5.

Keep up the good work.

…this is a delight. A delicious little morsel of a story, beautifully executed. Yes, a careful re-read before you published would've eliminated the few little typos, but they did not minimise my enjoyment of the delectable taste of this douce story. Well done, and thank you.

But not even close to a romance, it's a fuck story..."Erotic Coupling" nothing more...disapointing 4*

Finally a realistic story, makes other writers look second class