by Scipio555
This is a excellent story that is developed nicely. The seduction of the wife is brought along at the right pace as she is being controlled by Big. Hope to see further chapters of her seduction. Thanks for writing and sharing.
a very young black kid with a ten inch thick black cock living in my house where I could suck and fuck it whenever I wanted is wonderful, the way this story went would have gotten his ass tossed out the door in a New York minute. Being treated like some sub human cum dump is NOT my idea of erotic.
I agree with the below reader, nothing erotic about this story, instead the arrogant attitude of the black kid was irritating. Stopped reading at mid point, lost interest.
I liked the story though it's a little bit unrealistic, seduction usually happens at a slower rate. Plus no dude is that dumb to allow a black stud into his home alone with his wife.
The black kid is an asshole in this story and the name big just sounds stupid; also you should probably vary the kid's word choice (so he says something else then bitch); overall the pace is way too fast and the story is not even plausible
very hot story , please continue with part 2 ; there should be some facials in it as well please or maybe a bukkake scene
I agree with other comments that parts are unrealistic, but overall the development is going well. I hope there's more!
The bigger the melon the easier to get aroused. This was not conveyed that much and there could have been more emphasis on how the bigger breasted females respond when fondled. The fondling was more like rape and if it was intended to be rough make it rough, abuse those knockers! Good read.
so hot to get young black cock that like to ravage us older white wives
i want more of this one
"She was in a trance as his hands slid over her soft dress, once even reaching down to squeeze her ass while no one was looking. "
Yeah who would be looking at the bride at her wedding?