All Comments on 'The Right to Remain Silent Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice start!

Love the start of this story - there better be another part, and soon!

xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

brilliant i really enjoyed this story cant wait for the next chapter

estragonestragonalmost 12 years ago
Very Nice Police Procedural

Like your characters, and the plot is good. Now get a good copy editor on the job, and you'll have a winning story.

BahamaBahamaalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

That was an awesome opener! Damn cat you gat the moves like jagger :)

elle_9549elle_9549almost 12 years ago

Wonderful as always, Cat - and I can't wait to see what happens next! :) ~ L

redsox04meredsox04meover 11 years ago
Good!

Great opening to this series...Looking forward to the rest. You go Cat!

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
I Was a Fool!

This is another one of your stories that I actually read before, back when I was a shallower reader, not taking the time to appreciate good story-telling.

My tastes have matured, and I'm happy to re-read and/or read your stories with a fresh appreciation of your talents.

Thank you for a great read!

DCohen2349DCohen2349over 10 years ago
Excellent Start!

I hope you don't have Abi leave Sarah for Alice!

What I love about this story is that it doesn't NEED the sex. Obviously that's what we're all here for, but so many stories here have two (or more!) cyphers meet, hook up, then it's "Wham, Bam, Thank you, Ma'am!", and no story, no understanding of the characters.

This story would work as a police procedural.

Gotta finish this ASAP!

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

After a long hard night of work the need for a good relaxation is evidence ...... Smile ...... So let this dci rest well to win the case ...... 10 stars 💥💥💥💥💥⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

Love the whodunnit angle

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