All Comments on 'The Rise of Atlantis Pt. 01'

This is pretty good. Wishing you had continued Creations Guardian first, but interesting story line. From your comments, this probably will tie in somehow, so wishing extended story

Where's cheaper 12 of Creations Guardian

I know everyone wants CG12. but in order for that chapter to make sense, this story has to be told first. It sets the stage for some of the events that will occur in CG12. This won't be a long series. I'll wrap it up in about two more chapters...Bob54z

What an asshole the guy below me is. Lighten up Francis. It's just a freakin story, not rocket surgery.

Great job on this. I'm gonna start Creation Guardians now that I know this story ties into it.

Oh... Donald bin Dickhead al Chump... LOVING IT!!!! Bwaaaahahahahaha

Obviously someone couldn't handle the criticism as the comment below you has been removed. So much for free speech LOL. It's only allowed if you say what the author wants to hear or the person who posted below me.

Just for the record what is rocket surgery?. Did you perhaps mean rocket science. And please if you disagree with someone try not insult them by calling them an asshole it makes you appear to be childish.

I should've used "Brain Science" instead of "Rocket Surgery".

Bob, one thing I forgot to add. There were a few spelling errors in your story. It wasn't a major issue like others I've seen on this website. But it did slow down the flow of the story trying to figure out what it should have been. Just my $.02

First of your stories I've read. Good start to an interesting story line! Many possibilities from here! i will be watching and reading!

This was a great read looking forward to more thank you for sharing.

I deleted one comment because it was written in an offensive threatening manner not because of it's total lack of criticism on the story.I truly enjoy reading the comments left by my readers whether good or bad. However, I don't have to deal with threatening comments just because someone didn't like what I wrote...Bob54z

I deleted one comment because it was written in an offensive threatening manner not because of it's total lack of criticism on the story.

Bob the comment was never a criticism of the story, from all the feedback and ratings I'd say the story is probably quite good. It was a criticism that you have 2 other stories that are unfinished and I thought this one will probably follow suite. If you chose to interpret that as offensive and threatening I'm sorry, it was not meant to be in any way shape or form either offensive or threatening.

Bob as you have probably guessed from what I wrote above I haven't read your stories. So why comment in the first place you may be asking. One of my pet hates on this and other sites like it is all the unfinished stories, especially the well written ones. So when I spotted your new story by an author I didn't know I went straight to your bio to see if you had any other completed stories for me to read. I was so happy to find 2 stories I haven't read. But having been disappointed may times in the past I now go right to the last chapter to ensure the story is finished, imagine my disappointment when I found not 1 but 2 unfinished stories by you and now your stating a third story. That's why I felt the need to write and criticise the fact you have unfinished stories. Sorry you found my comment offensive and threatening.

Great start for a great story.

Enjoyed the story and hope it continues. I would love to see a conclusion to 'Creation's Guardian' at some time.

I love both of these stories so far. I was wondering what your plans are for those who where wounded in both body and mind in military service what are you going to do with them. and what are you going to do with the transgendered who's parents have those them out of their home because of it.

Thank you for your comment but it's just a story. Now I would suggest you put on your "big girl" panties and grow up

Interesting outline, but the weird twists every few minutes to increase drama are really random. I like the universe but the details are just a bit jarring 4/5

transferring 100s of gegabytes of data in 2.5 hours is more impressive than FTL!