All Comments on 'The Rise of Rachel Price T-Girl Pt. 11'

With Charlie asking Denver about piercings and HRT, it sounds like they may be to the point of forcing him into a more permanent direction to be Rachael. Great story

I like how the story had been moving the MC slowly and carefully into becoming Rachael, with Charlie being the carrot. Suggesting piercing and HRT, it sounds like they may be ready to push him into a more permanent situation.

Thanks @BlueEyes2022 and Anonymous for the comments, I think you spotted some significant steps. I'm getting the feeling many other readers are not happy with this prospect (this is the first chapter to drop below the 4.5 stars definition of hot ). On the other hand, Rachel kissed Hunter spontaneously so who can be sure?

I must admit this chapter contains my favorite lines of dialog so far

Hunter "I can't believe you have secrets."

"Mr. Hunter, it's a well-known fact that women are 85% secrets and ten percent water. I read it in a magazine."'

H. "What is the other 5%?"

R. "Its a secret."

Such a delicious story line which I love to read where lead , it’s not heavy it’s not wham bam but leading all the same. More please xxx

Liked it, not sure where this is going.

great story great writer

Mil