All Comments on 'The Rising Sun & The Morning Calm Ch. 09'

This story is wonderful! The pacing, the characters, the unique flavor are all exeedingly well done. It is also such a relief to read something that has so few errors. Great editing! Thank you!

looking forward to the next chapter

I'm really looking forward to everything merging in the story. You're drawing the lines very well.

If you have doubts as to your abilities as a writer, well, you can lose them. After all, an author's worth is measured by the reader's reaction to his {her} material,and these submissions are very good; your historical references must have been meticulously researched, and indicates basic honesty even in writing fiction. The translations provided are also a very thoughtful consideration of the reader's comfort. Please post more of them as soon as you can

I have just read all your stories in one go and your stories deserve praise for their invention, verve and, since this is Literotica, for their eroticism. Please continue.

Anything else has already been stated in previous comments... one thing though your effort shows and I hope you keep writing for a while to come.

It's a Disgrace for the government to omit this important part in history there raping history if this is not apart how are we to learn from this or beaware of this shameful act committed upon these innocent woman if it is not disclosed it's bound to repeat itself.

Great chapter

Please continue! Reading on.

Loving the relevant history in your story, just recently watched Aljazeera documentary on comfort women and how they're still fighting now for recognition and apologies respiration from Japanese Government. Brought a tear to my eyes when reading about it in your story as if I were there. Great read.